Try to add more images to Question 1 and 2 of the evaluation. In Question 1 annotate your pages to identify the conventions you used. Use images from your magazine to illustrate representation.
Consider including a summary of your research - what have you found out about conventions of music magazines, and your target audience - as either mind-maps of powerpoints.
59/100 D (1 mark to achieve a C)
ReplyDeleteR & P 13/20
Construction 37/60
Make sure your magazine pages are viewable.
Evaluation 9/20
Make your evaluation less text based. Use more images to support the points you make.
Try to add more images to Question 1 and 2 of the evaluation. In Question 1 annotate your pages to identify the conventions you used. Use images from your magazine to illustrate representation.
ReplyDeleteConsider including a summary of your research - what have you found out about conventions of music magazines, and your target audience - as either mind-maps of powerpoints.